雅思写作范文16 (education)

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What is the most significant factor in influencing the shaping of characters and personality of
a child? Do academic subjects really render everything necessary for children's all-round
development? Most schools put major emphasis on academic teaching because it is believed that
academic subjects can guarantee better future careers. However, in fact, other subjects such as
literature, music and sports, are more crucial to children's development for they can give
children many things beyond academic learning, including teamwork spirit, endurance and healthy
physical body.
It is true that academic subjects can teach children some fundamental knowledge and they can get
further education and skills with such knowledge. But I don't think academic learning can
necessarily ensure better future careers. Academic learning is like the fundamental structure of
architecture, it can only be improved and perfected by some other decorations, and that means it
is supplementary subjects that can refine a child's development.
Learning literature can make children sensitive to things around them and teach them to be careful
observers; music can tell children how to relax them selves and get inspirations through the power
of it; sports can build strong wills and bodies for children for it shows to them the spirit of
endurance and teamwork. We know that all these qualities are badly needed in children's social
lives in the future, especially when they get along or work with other people, when they confront
difficulties or obstacles, and so on.
What our society needs are not people who know nothing besides their textbooks, but people who know
how to apply what they learn, know how to appreciate and endure in their lives, that means people
with full sensibilities and practical skills; all these are not things children can learn from
academic subjects.
In conclusion, I think schools should reach a balance between academic subjects and other ones, so
that we can expect new generations with all-round development.
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